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so the story I mentioned here has a sequel! The first story ended with a proposal, marriage and introduction of a baby. The 2nd story has the baby (named Daniel Steven McGarrett) and a fairly decent case (Steve abducted by someone from Grace's past).

Why did I look up this author? I was curious to see if there was a sequel. so far it's at 13 chapters. I read all 13 chapters and kept going wtf?! and the comments...omg. well written? not really. good characterization? whoa nelly, NO! But I know this is an AU, I just can't get over Steve being in love with Grace! The girl called him uncle! Her father is his best friend! and don't even get me started (again) on how calm Danny and Rachel were about it!

But anyways...this sequel...if I try to ignore the pairing, which is hard considering it's mentioned a lot, the story is okay.

morbid curiocity is going to have me following this new story until it's complete...and hope that there's no more. But the author has said the more they write Grace/Steve the more they love the pairing. IDGI
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There is no world that would make this Grace/Steve (canon age at that!) okay! There is no world that would have Danny okay, at any point, with that relationship. In what world would Steve think of (16/17 yr old) Grace as "smokin' hot"?!

But wait...apparently there is! and it's called fanfiction.net!

I did this to myself in asking for the link to the fic. the author said it was going to be a one shot, but now it's 9 fucking chapters!

I'm sorry...what?!

Oh and underage sex in the first chapter!

No...just no.

Of the 12 comments, there was praise, in various forms. I'm surprised there was no outrage!

eta in chapter 4, the author put this note up: Okay some of you are probably wondering just how old Commander McGarrett is in this fic. This story is pretty AU obviously, so I'm saying Steve was 26 when Grace was 10. She's 18 now so that puts him at 34. If that ruins your image of him in this fic the forget I said anything lol. But for those of you wondering, there ya go!

now that would put Danny/Rachel at teen parents when Grace was born, right? oh boy! Rachel didn't have a problem with her daughter, barely out of high school and just turned 18, being in a relationship with a man old enough to be her father. Kono, Chin, Charlie and Max all know about the relationship, and they don't have a problem with it.

Now, this doesn't mean that I'm not opposed to Steve/Grace. I've read a handful of fics like that, but Grace is an adult in them. and they were okay.



Let me go back to my happy McDanno place.
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A Discussion of Clothing by wook77
It's the oldest line in the book but it still takes Danny by surprise.

Hannah Montana, Matchmaker Extraordinaire by smallearthcat (vamplover82)
Danny catches Steve in an embarrassing moment.
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{Take the 100 Things challenge!}


I hadn't planned on doing this, but I always like having something to do during the summer, and this summer is going to be no different.

So, what will my 100 things be?

50 graphics

AND

50 fics

This will be my Masterlist for everything I create.

Here is where I need your help to spark my creativity. Leave me as many prompts as you like. The more the merrier. I will try my hardest to work with what I'm given.

For the 50 graphics, link me to images. Icons and picspams are something I love making.
For the 50 fics, give me prompts in the H50 fandom. I will write drabbles or ficlets. The length of the fic will depend on how inspired I am by your prompt. I'm most comfortable with Danny/Steve and Danny/Kono and I do the others as gen. Your prompt/request can be as vague or specific as you like.

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