Alex and Scott on ET

and I don't mean aliens

Who likes living in Hawaii?
TCA's July 29, 2012

In watching that, I was waiting for someone (namely Scott) to look at Alex and say "what did you just say?" Not because of the accent or anything, but because really, what did Alex say? I couldn't figure out what he was talking about (besides the show).

oh wth

ugh! someone asks for concrit and I give it, and they continue to make the same damn errors in future chapters/stories.

The errors aren't necessarily minor ones either. Misspelling a person's name or a city. Those are things that can be "jarring" to readers and I only point them out bc the author says they don't have a beta and they want concrit.