simplyn2deep: (Scott Caan::writing)
Here it is *smirk* I was on vacation this past week. Sadly, not in Florence, but it was someplace just as, and seeing the colors of the shops in the Bahamas gave me some ideas for this prompt. Also, hearing people talk about wanting to go on a cruise to Italy contributed to the story's location. Then, when I got home Sunday night, which is when I was able to start working on this.

I used Google Translate, so...y'know, *shrug*

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Title: Ecco il Cuore (Here is the Heart)

Summary: A young American artist living in Florence stumbles upon an old bookshop and an even older mystery involving a series of paintings signed only with the word Ecco. As she uncovers the story behind the signature, she finds herself entangled in love, legacy, and the question of what it truly means to be seen.

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It started with the bell, an old, cracked chime that sang out above the door like it hadn’t been touched in years.

"Ecco," said the man behind the counter, with a flick of his hand, as if the very sight of her had completed something.

The word hung in the air like perfume, unexpected but not unwelcome.

Juliette blinked, pushing up the sleeve of her linen shirt, the one now smudged with charcoal and city grime. She had ducked into the narrow bookshop not for any philosophical reason, but because the Florentine sun had become unbearable and her sketchpad was threatening to melt.

She glanced around. The shop was a maze of crooked wood and dust, with old shelves leaning like conspirators. There was no air conditioning, but the thick stone walls offered enough relief to make her linger.

The man behind the counter was older, perhaps in his late sixties, with silver hair and eyes that seemed to have seen wars or, worse, the boredom of students.

He nodded again. “Ecco. I was wondering when you’d come.”

Juliette half-laughed. “Excuse me?”

He waved her over, and when she hesitated, he simply said, “Non ti preoccupare. Vieni. (Don't worry. Come.)”

She stepped forward, wary but curious, the way a stray cat might approach a friendly hand. He slid a book across the counter to her. It was a slim volume, bound in wine-red leather. No title on the cover.

Juliette opened it, and the scent of ancient ink hit her like a song she hadn’t heard in years. Inside were sketches, some rough, some detailed, some like half-formed dreams. She recognized the hand immediately.

“Who did these?” she asked.

The man gave her a small, knowing smile. “That is the question.”

Each sketch was signed the same way: Ecco.

Juliette traced the name with her fingertip. “Here is...what, exactly?”

“Ecco can mean many things,” he said. “Here it is. Look. This is it. A presentation, a revelation. Or perhaps just presence. The artist signed not with their name, but with a gesture...an offering.”

She didn’t speak for a moment, then finally asked, “Do you know who they are?”

The man tilted his head. “Some say a student of Botticelli. Others, a nun who painted in secret. One theory insists it was a young man who disguised his identity to escape scandal. But the truth?” He tapped the cover. “Perhaps the answer is inside you.”

Juliette looked at him, uncertain if she was being played or recruited into something. “Why give this to me?”

“You came in from the sun, sì? Uninvited. And yet, Ecco. Here you are.”

That word again.

He wrote something on a slip of paper and handed it to her. An address, an alley not far from the Arno.

“Go there,” he said. “Bring the book.”

She should have walked away. She should have thanked him, put the book down, and left the shop as if nothing had happened.

Instead, she tucked the book into her satchel and walked out the door without another word.

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The address led her to a decaying palazzo wedged between modern cafés and careless traffic. The courtyard was made of cracked marble, but still beautiful, with ivy curling around its columns like whispered secrets.

Inside, the rooms were empty except for one. A small gallery faded but intact. A light filtered through stained glass, washing everything in the colors of melted gelato.

And there, along the walls, were more works. Sketches. Oils. Frescoes barely holding on.

All signed: Ecco.

She moved from piece to piece, breath catching in her throat. There was a woman holding a broken compass. A child lighting a candle against the wind. A mirror turned toward the sea.

Each one felt like a sentence from a language she once knew and had nearly forgotten.

And then she saw it. Her face.

Or someone who could have been her. Same jawline. Same mole beneath the left eye. The same look of stubborn longing. She stumbled back, heart hammering.

Ecco.

Here it is.

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She returned to the shop that evening. The man was locking up.

“You knew,” she accused.

He smiled gently. “I suspected.”

“Who painted that?”

He leaned against the doorframe. “The artist used what they saw. That doesn’t mean they knew you. Or maybe they did.”

Juliette’s mind reeled. “Are you saying I’ve been...reincarnated?”

“I’m saying ecco is not just a word,” he replied. “It is a mirror. Some people run from it. Some people chase it. And some people live it.”

He handed her a small package wrapped in brown paper. Inside: new sketchbooks, brushes, and a single note: The past is not only behind you. Sometimes it waits to be remembered. Ecco.

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Juliette never did learn the name of the artist. But she spent the rest of the summer sketching by the river, in cafes, in shadowed alleys and sunlit courtyards. She started signing her work differently. Not with her name.

Just one word.

Ecco.

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(833 words)
simplyn2deep: (Scott Caan::writing)
 An original piece.

The Measure of Quality

Marisol prided herself on precision. Each evening, she stood in her workshop, a narrow, sunlit room at the back of her house, and cleaned her tools, inspected her materials, and arranged her worktable until it aligned with her exacting standards. On the wall hung a tiny brass plaque she had crafted herself, engraved with the single word Quality. It served as both reminder and command.

Tonight was special. Tomorrow she’d present her latest creation at the citywide Maker’s Exhibition, a celebration for inventors, artisans, and tinkerers alike. Her entry was modest. A mechanical flower, delicate and intricate, with gears as elegantly arranged as petals, powered by a tiny clockwork mechanism. But to Marisol, it represented the pinnacle of her craft.

She watched the flower revolve gently under the soft glow of her lamp. With a fingertip, she traced the polished edge of a petal. “You're perfect,” she whispered.

Behind her, a cough. Her brother, Marco, stepped in, rubbing his eyes. He leaned against the doorframe, arms folded.

“You’ve been at it all night,” he said.

Marisol blew on one last smear of oil and set the piece to the side. “I need to get this just right. The judges at the exhibition...they’ll expect the same attention to detail you see here.”

Marco stepped into the workshop. “It looks great. But they also pay attention to presentation, story, charm...not just mechanical precision.”

Marisol frowned. “I know what’s important. The quality of the mechanism will speak for itself.”

“Maybe,” Marco said gently. “But people connect with a story. And with emotion. Don’t underestimate that.”

Marisol paused. “It’s just...telling stories feels sloppy. Unmeasurable. Mechanical quality, I can control that.”

Marco nodded, stepping over the threshold. “Control, that’s part of it. But craft is more than control, isn’t it? You’ve always been able to build the most precise widgets, but this...this flower is beautiful in a way your others weren’t. Maybe it’s because you let a little imperfection, some humanity, speak through.”

She tilted her head. “You think I should, what? Add a flaw on purpose? A smudge of paint?”

He smiled. “Not exactly. Let the mechanics bite a little, or let the petals cast a shadow. Show them something that feels alive.”

Marisol turned back to her workbench. “Alive,” she mused. “I can’t schedule that.”

Marco walked over and added, “Maybe you don’t schedule it. Maybe you let it happen.”

She closed her eyes, then opened them. “Alright. Show me.”

He flicked a finger at the wind-up key. The flower rotated, rhythmically, but with near-mathematical predictability. “What if you change the rhythm? Make one rotation take just a fraction longer, then let it spring quickly, like a heartbeat?”

She frowned again. “That sounds like a defect.”

“Or a heartbeat,” Marco countered.

She considered it. Then placed her finger on one crucial gear and shifted it. An imperceptible change. She wound the key and let it run.

For the first three revolutions, the flower rotated slowly. On the fourth, it sped up, then slowed again. The change was subtle but noticeable. The flower no longer moved like a machine. It pulsed.

Marco exhaled. “There. Alive.”

Marisol studied the flower’s motion under the lamp. She hardly recognized it. Her fingers trembled. “It's different.”

“It’s magnetic,” he said. “That’s what the judges will feel.”

She nodded slowly. “Let it be my flaw.”

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At dawn, Marisol packed the mechanical flower in a velvet-lined box. She tucked her brother's advice in her pocket too, like a talisman. Then she set out, walking through the city’s cobblestone streets to the Exhibition Hall.

Inside, the hall buzzed with excitement. Booths displayed wooden automata, embroidered tapestries, holographic art, robotic pets. A steady hum of conversation and clinking cups drifted overhead.

Marisol found her assigned table. An oak slab with half a dozen other entries. She laid the velvet box carefully in the center. Around her, exhibits gleamed. She felt a flicker of doubt. What if mechanical quality wasn’t enough?

An elderly judge approached, Ms. Augustine, a slim woman with silver hair and sharp eyes. She stopped at Marisol’s table and peered down.

“Good morning, young lady.” She extended her hand. “I’m Aurelia Augustine. Would you tell me about your piece?”

Marisol exhaled. “It’s a clockwork flower. I built it to mimic the rhythm of life, with gears designed to pulse...”

Ms. Augustine’s lips curved into a small smile. “I’m intrigued. May I?”

Marisol lifted the velvet lid. The flower, at rest, seemed paused in slumber. She wound the key and stepped back. It began its dance: deliberate, then quickened, like a breath drawn in surprise, then slowed, receding, gathering power, then pause.

The judges and nearby visitors leaned in. Marisol’s heart raced.

Ms. Augustine nodded slowly. “There is...emotion in its motion. Not random noise, but something more profound.”

Marisol felt her breath catch. Her vision narrowed.

Ms. Augustine pointed to the mech. “Tell me, were these fluctuations intentional?”

Marisol swallowed. “Yes. I...I over-engineered many versions to be perfectly smooth. But my brother...he said life isn’t perfect. He said to let it breathe.”

A murmur passed through the crowd. Ms. Augustine whispered, “You've created not only a mechanical device but a living echo. That quality, the soul within craft, is what elevates invention to art.”

Marisol felt warmth flood her. She dared to look at her flower, spinning in gentle, uneven perfection.

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Later, on the Exhibition stage, the winners were announced. Marisol’s table was already being cleared when she heard her name, “Second Prize for Innovation: Marisol Reyes, ‘The Mechanical Heartflower.’” Applause echoed off the walls.

She frowned. Second place? But she felt...accomplished.

Ms. Augustine approached again. “Congratulations. You've done something rare. But to place first, the top entry needed more scale, an expanded concept, a larger context.”

Marisol nodded. “I understand. And I’m grateful.”

Outside after the ceremony, Marco greeted her with a grin. The air smelled of summer blooms.

“You did it,” he said, pulling her into a hug.

She closed her eyes. “You were right.”

He squeezed her hand. “So what’s next?”

She looked up at the rotating Ferris wheel in the distance, its lights painting the dusk sky. “I think I’ll build a whole garden of mechanical hearts. Not perfect machines, but machines that feel. And this time, I won’t treat the wobble like a defect. I'll treat it like the point, the centerpiece.”

Marco laughed. “That sounds like something only you could make.”

Marisol turned back to the Exhibition Hall, where late stragglers lingered, admiring others’ works. “I want to invite people in. To let them wind a flower and listen to their own heart in its beat.”

He smiled. “Now that's quality.”

She paused, pressed her fingers to her pulse. “Yes. That’s real quality.”

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(1120 words)
 

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What is this...the 3rd day I've updated? I don't know, but it's more frequent than it was last year.

But I can here now to say that I made a page for my original story that started working on at the beginning of the month. [livejournal.com profile] ogsafehaven is where I will be posting behind the scenes stuff for my story. Its called The Safe Haven Trail.
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I had an idea for a fic, but in my head it was too large for the timeframe I had, so I'm turning it into an original story.

I'm giving all the characters new surnames, backgrounds (I love creating backgrounds) and even the location for where the story is to take place will be different.

I plan on really plotting/outlining it in December and spending all of 2015 writing it. Thinking realistically, I hope I can do it. I mean, I even figured out my daily word counts:

50,000 total words = 137 words/day for 365 days
150,000 total words = 411 words/day for 365 days

Obviously I'd want to write more than that daily, but if I just can't write, I'd want to try for those minimum dailies.




This is NOT going to be 50 Shades of Grey or Twilight!

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