It needs more work

[simplyn2deep]

I made this yesterday but not entirely pleased with the outcome. I need to work on it more.

Version 1:

Version 2:

Comments

[diek09.livejournal.com]

I think it looks really nice.

My suggestion (but just because I like bright graphics), would to enhance the light and contrast a little bit, and I would erase the light blue part that is over Grace's chin, but that's just me.

Overall, I think it's gonna be really cool :)

[simplyn2deep.livejournal.com]

Thank you.

I edited it and added the new version to the entry.

[diek09.livejournal.com]

\O/ Great! Way to go!

But it's quite distracting. Well, I get easily distracted. I love Grace's colouring, and the ohana detail with the flower is priceless.

[lostandalone22.livejournal.com]

These are really pretty.

[simplyn2deep.livejournal.com]

thank you