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simplyn2deepI need someone to beta something I've been working on. totally under 1,000 words. It should have been posted last night, but I got home too late.
I think I caught all my mistakes, but I've been reading over this so much, that I'm probably making more mistakes than fixing them.
The fic is part of my Life with Jacob McGarrett-Williams AU series. While they aren't mentioned in this particular fic, Nick Taylor and Freddie Hart never went bad and/died for the purpose of this series.
if anyone can look this over for me, here's the link (google docs) for where it's at.
I have another long day a head of me and hope to write the sequel to this today or tomorrow.
I think I caught all my mistakes, but I've been reading over this so much, that I'm probably making more mistakes than fixing them.
The fic is part of my Life with Jacob McGarrett-Williams AU series. While they aren't mentioned in this particular fic, Nick Taylor and Freddie Hart never went bad and/died for the purpose of this series.
if anyone can look this over for me, here's the link (google docs) for where it's at.
I have another long day a head of me and hope to write the sequel to this today or tomorrow.
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