last night's H50
Nov. 20th, 2012 09:45 am![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
simplyn2deepoops! I almost forgot to put this behind a cut!
The main thing that stuck out for me was that when Mary finally came around, it was like the 10 year old little girl who lost her mother and not the 30 year old woman who was so obviously screwed up by her mother faking her death. Mary's at John's grave site was more believable and a bit more acceptable than Mary falling back into Doris' arms and crying.
and then I have more thoughts (sort of) here.
The main thing that stuck out for me was that when Mary finally came around, it was like the 10 year old little girl who lost her mother and not the 30 year old woman who was so obviously screwed up by her mother faking her death. Mary's at John's grave site was more believable and a bit more acceptable than Mary falling back into Doris' arms and crying.
and then I have more thoughts (sort of) here.
