are you serious?!

I'm beta reading something for someone (whose native language isn't English...I don't think) and they straight copied and pasted wedding vows from somewhere for Danny and Steve, but didn't change the feminine words to masculine!

I already have my work cut out with the other parts I'm beta reading for them for another story.

{FIC} A Long Time Coming (implied Steve/Danny + Mary; PG)

Title: A Long Time Coming
Characters/Pairings: implied Steve/Danny, Mary
Rating: PG
Author: simplyn2deep/simplyn2deep
Word count: ~510
Warnings: none
Disclaimer: All Hawaii Five-0 characters herein are the property of CBS. No copyright infringement is intended.
Author's Note 1: Not beta'd so any and all errors/flubs/mistakes are mine. Sorry. I'll do better next time! :)
Author's Note 2: Written for the prompt telepathy given to me by willow_fae_20 HERE
Author's Note 3: While this is a one shot, there is more to this story and eventually get back to it.
Summary: Since his father's death, Steve avoided returning home, but when he received a distressed message from his sister, he had no choice but to return.

LJ | AO3

{FIC} A Long Time Coming (implied Steve/Danny + Mary; PG)

Title: A Long Time Coming
Characters/Pairings: implied Steve/Danny, Mary
Rating: PG
Author: simplyn2deep/simplyn2deep
Word count: ~510
Warnings: none
Disclaimer: All Hawaii Five-0 characters herein are the property of CBS. No copyright infringement is intended.
Author's Note 1: Not beta'd so any and all errors/flubs/mistakes are mine. Sorry. I'll do better next time! :)
Author's Note 2: Written for the prompt telepathy given to me by willow_fae_20 HERE
Author's Note 3: While this is a one shot, there is more to this story and eventually get back to it.
Summary: Since his father's death, Steve avoided returning home, but when he received a distressed message from his sister, he had no choice but to return.

LJ | AO3



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more pitfalls

how to I get my Word spell checker to stay in US English?

This fic I'm beta reading was written with a version of Word from Ireland, so the spell checker/dictionary that's coming up is using English from Ireland. My Hawaiian words, contractions and slang words are coming up as wrong. It's also saying the grammar is wrong as well.

Anyone know how to fix this?

eta: got it sorted. yay

*high pitched squeal* SPOILERS

OMG! I love it!

( totally a spoiler for 3x02 )