I try to avoid the trop-y cliches in my writing. So I hope this isn't something I've done. But all things considered when it comes to Danny talking to Steve not about work, I want to say that abouut 8 times out of 10 he does devolve into a rant of sorts, in canon. So there is some support for it..
But I get what you are saying. I get kind of annoyed when Fic!Danny constantly refers to Hawaii as a pineapple infested he'll hole. He did it once early in season 1. I feel like, in Canon, his character has grown past that. So authors need to move past it too. If the fic is based any time after about 3/4 of the way through S1 don't have Danny use that phrase to refer to Hawaii. That, and the tie thing. It was cute in the first 10 stories I read, now it's just old.
Sorry for the wonky punctuation, I'm on my tablet.
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Date: 2012-09-06 12:06 am (UTC)But I get what you are saying. I get kind of annoyed when Fic!Danny constantly refers to Hawaii as a pineapple infested he'll hole. He did it once early in season 1. I feel like, in Canon, his character has grown past that. So authors need to move past it too. If the fic is based any time after about 3/4 of the way through S1 don't have Danny use that phrase to refer to Hawaii. That, and the tie thing. It was cute in the first 10 stories I read, now it's just old.
Sorry for the wonky punctuation, I'm on my tablet.