does he really get that angry, that fast?

[simplyn2deep]

as I've been beta reading a lot more fics, I've noticed something that annoys me a bit (yes, I'm adding it to my list of things that fanfic authors do that annoy me). When Danny is written, he goes from "normal" to ranting at Steve, or at least it's written that.

Like Steve will ask Danny a simple question, then BAM! Danny is off and ranting (and also giving his answer to whatever question was asked).

Best friend or not, I wouldn't want to talk with someone who's default speaking habit (with me) was full on rant.

I also stopped following like 3 fics because it's more of a chore than pleasure to read them. maybe I'll pick up where I left off when the fics are finished.

Comments

[lou-c.livejournal.com]

I think sometimes it's is also just someone, an intelligent and quick-witted man who likes to talk, playing with words and being colorfully descriptive. Even when he isn't yelling he is being the wordsmith. And he also uses it to disarm people, they're nt expecting the 'see we know it was you and I'm gonna make sure the jury sees just how cruel you were' when he's been all blah blah hands hands. Tony in ncis does the same. I call it verbal flash bang.

I maybe write too many carguments but they are just so darn fun!

[simplyn2deep.livejournal.com]

I totally agree about Danny being a wordsmith.

the cargument is cool. If possible, every fic/episode should have at least 1 cargument lol

[lou-c.livejournal.com]

I want to do something I'm good at I like to be reminded that I'm good at what I do. A prime example. It's poetry. Like Eliza dolittle's dad haha.