I got totally into writing an H50 fic too. My only problem is getting character voices down. I can't get Danno right at all unless he's off and ranting. And Kono and Chin are pretty much not talking to me at all. I think I need to put Season One on and just listen to it till I go insane. Cause the PLOT? The plot's awesome.... but the execution is killing me.

I'll definitely need a beta at some point and my usual beta is lacking net access and doesn't watch. You willing - on the assumption I ever get it done?